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  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    **can they plllllleeeeease get into a fight? I like drama lol*** Robyn "I'm sorry you wanted me to ask you? Oh well I'm sorry, your face was ONLY turning blue, ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    Robyn "I don't think that's a good idea, what if I'm right in the future? I don't think he should learn magic." "It could save his life one day." Alex ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    Robyn I stood far away from the two, I stared at myself, she was frusterated and annoyed, the future Alex was shocked in pain and in denial. I saw Lucas ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: 3am in the City

    I agree with the user above me, it looks like a paragragh, when you make it longer PM me and I'll review it again, until then, good luck.

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    Robyn I was about to answer his question when they both started talking to each other. "I am NOT having this conversation with you again, I told you why." The ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    Robyn I nodded into his chest, three years into the future coming right up. I closed my eyes and counted to ten, then opened them... Alex was still holding me, ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Oh, the complexities of joy and love

    First off I looooove your avatar! Next, I really like this, but there's not much for me to correct because it's so short. Maybe make it longer? But I can ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    Robyn "I had to." I said with tears in my eyes, I closed them again and shook my head. "Please don't hate me." I said. "THAT WASN'T YOUR DESCITION TO ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    Sam "She'll get him back. I promise." Aurora backed up. "How can you promise me that?" She growled. "Well... doesn't she always?" Robyn "Bring him back." I said through clenched ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    Robyn I screamed again, I blew up almost everything glass in sight. "I need you... please... come back." I sobbed against his body. I kissed his lips, they were already ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    **He will duh!!! lol*** Robyn I felt tears spill over. "No, please no." I cried. "Alex you can't leave me." I cried. "I'm sorry." He said. "I won't forgive you." ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    **maybe, I have an idea :)** Robyn "You can't leave me here." I said touching his face lightly. Sam "Yes, as a matter a fact yes." I put my hands ...

    Sep 16, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    Sam I took Aurora in my arms. "We all want what we can't have.... I want and yet can't have you." I said kissing the top of her head. Wishing ...

    Sep 16, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    Robyn Lucas looked pale, he looked like he was in pain. "What's wrong kiddo?" Alex asked, Lucas staggered forward, Alex caught him as he fell forward, a black arrow had ...

    Sep 16, 2008
  • Archive Re: School For Magical Creatures

    Robyn The wall was cold against my back. I groaned, as he pushed me against it again, my spine bruising. He looked down at me. "How 'bout you me and-" ...

    Sep 16, 2008


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